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Lovely! Good work K, you clearly understand the format of a free verse poem and have used to put across a strong message. I really liked this linen“But i do enjoy myselfnWhen Iu2019m With younSorry if I havenu2019t showed it?”n(Although “showed” should be “shown”)nas it really lets us know something about the narrator – that is, that she can sometimes hide her true feelings. Little touches of character or personality like this are very important to good writing!nThere are a couple of typos, “jsut” and “been” instead of “being” but this a very good effort, well done! Come on http://tropaadet.dk/edythemills62093081830
Comment by edythemills62093 — April 8, 2016 @ 2:36 am